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Re: Third Avenue
Wow this was really good. I loved how your story felt so calm and so strange at the same time. I loved the description you gave to each chacrter in ...
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: Curse creeping through the woods
Oh wow, thank you everyone for actually reading this and replying. Thank you so much, ususally i don't let anyone read anything i write so i don't think my skills ...
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: Curse creeping through the woods
Another long lost forgotten piece collecting dust on my computer Curse creeping through the woods It bit down hard on its bottom lip, the pressure causing a thin split across ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Faceless
wow, this was really amazing i really like the unique way you use the second person it went really well and that rarely happens so congrats though the bit were ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: The Daughter of the Sun and the Son of the Moon
wow its like an actual fairy tale it bet you could get it published after a few tweaks
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Ink Catcher
Well, this story is all well and fine, but I think you should write more romance. Why doesn't the librarian fall head over heels for this devilishly charming young ink ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: A Full Moon's Dusk
yeah so i posted the unfinshed poem ages ago and i can't find it :roll: so i decided to post it again only finished. enjoy and comment please :) A ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: once opon a moonlit hour
thanks i really like how you changed the beginning and yh i did forget the punctuation
Jul 21, 2009 -
Re: Beauty is a Beast
wow this was amazing i hope you win hey could you read my poem and see what you think it's on narrative poetry too and it's called ' once opon ...
Jul 21, 2009 -
Re: once opon a moonlit hour
this is my first poem that i have uploaded, i know it needs work so help me out. once opon a moonlit hour once opon a moonlit hour when the ...
Jul 21, 2009 -
Re: These (Revamped.)
i really enjoyed reading this. it was sweet and funny and very entertaining to read. :P i'm new here and haven't read much but your short story has been my ...
Jul 20, 2009
